02-23-2009, 05:38 PM
ArchmageFurly Wrote:Instead, you're going to find yourself at a dead-end job which in places such as India would be handled by an untouchable, and in order to solve the question of your existentialism, you're going to spend your free time on the internet annoying those that far surpass your importance and contribution to society, and though you'll tell yourself that you are doing well, on a sub-conscious level you understand the futility of your measures, and in time you and your malnourished potential for the betterment of this world will fade away into nothingness.
HOLY GOD! RUN-ON SENTENCE! Don't make your compound sentence 50x compounded. Make some o' dem independent clauses whole sentences!
GAWD DAM JEW EVEN REED WATT U RIGHT? ; )