07-17-2012, 01:12 PM
Fixing your terrible sentence structure. I also did grammar even though it doesn't matter because I couldn't help it.
Also, if you want to get people interested, you'll want to tempt them with some things that are familiar. "All these random, far flung, unimportnat lore facts about shit you've never heard of!" is not as exciting as "Obscure but interesting lore fact about someone you've actually heard of!" Learning that Illidan only had one ball would be more interesting than learning that the second boss in MgT is the son of a rare elite in Duskwood.
abecx Wrote:Blizzard's Warcraft franchise has been around for nearly 20 years and will soon release another expansion. WoW was created to immerse the player in lore and give them the opportunity to interact with some of the mythos' most prominent figures... Unfortunately, once you've killed a few bosses, it’s easy to lose track of what the hell is going on and the game can turn into a story-less loot fest.At the end, it's weird that you start out asking questions then kinda bungle into making statements and sum it up with a statement at the end. It's awkward, but I couldn't figure out a good way to fix it. The questions don't really turn into good statements and making all of them into questions got repetitive. You'll just have to solve it with smooth inflection between the last question and the first statement. Take a fraction of a second longer pause and go down with your voice when asking the questions and up when making the statements.
Let’s face it, with a story line threaded through more than 15 books, 12 video games and even a trading card game, you would have to be wearing a red shirt to interpret what your character is doing and why. Luckily, people like us are fat and can’t get girlfriends, so we have plenty of time to explain what the fuck is going on.
(show the original map, fade into the same area but in WoW times, show the dark portal, cutscenes from the other games, hellscream, etc )
Ever wanted to know what these are?
(show the faceless flying aqir insects)
What about this awesome interspecies porn experiment?
(Video of Rexxar)
Listen to detailed information about why you have to kill this asshole.
(Scarlet Monastary)
Find out why this(these?) guy(s) may not be as bad as you thought.
(Video of Moroes or illidan, both maybe )
And a lot more interesting shit with serious soundtracks.
(show various places around the game)
Also, if you want to get people interested, you'll want to tempt them with some things that are familiar. "All these random, far flung, unimportnat lore facts about shit you've never heard of!" is not as exciting as "Obscure but interesting lore fact about someone you've actually heard of!" Learning that Illidan only had one ball would be more interesting than learning that the second boss in MgT is the son of a rare elite in Duskwood.