07-22-2012, 02:15 AM
abecx Wrote:like cahn said the music is fucked, use warcraft music there is a lot of it and it's good
start with a warcraft logo, use more logos
your voice is fucked up from 00:00-00:45 you sound like you're trying too hard and you're reading from a script
there is way too much of a change in voice after 00:45 as it's clear you recorded it at a different time with possibly different audio equipment or settings
consolidate and relax the speaking more, pretend you're talking to WLPH on mumble not the whole world on YouTube
the script is actually good, I like it, we are fat and have no girlfriends (mini clearly is paying that escort money to be in pictures with him) and have all this time to watch this bullshit as we don't have jobs so please entertain us!
not bad for a work in progress