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[ArchmageFurly in three days]

Fuck three days I've been excited about this project, I'm just loaded down with work today, but I'll draw up a plan tonight and post it. Sorry this is kinda rushed and vague but I'm like super duper busy right now.

I will say thought that I really like the ideas and screenshots. As shitty as the mic quality in your vid is I like the attitude, its not boring ranting about lore it's "check this shit out" which is something that any video that wants to get popular needs, some kind of edge.

[CAN]

you shouldn't curse so much. wows audience is 10 year olds

[mininolan]

Fuck three days I've been excited about this project, I'm just loaded down with work today, but I'll draw up a plan tonight and post it. Sorry this is kinda rushed and vague but I'm like super duper busy right now.

I will say thought that I really like the ideas and screenshots. As shitty as the mic quality in your vid is I like the attitude, its not boring ranting about lore it's "check this shit out" which is something that any video that wants to get popular needs, some kind of edge.

you still banging that bitch kasu?

[Firecrest]

Fuck three days I've been excited about this project, I'm just loaded down with work today, but I'll draw up a plan tonight and post it. Sorry this is kinda rushed and vague but I'm like super duper busy right now.

I will say thought that I really like the ideas and screenshots. As shitty as the mic quality in your vid is I like the attitude, its not boring ranting about lore it's "check this shit out" which is something that any video that wants to get popular needs, some kind of edge.

you still banging that bitch kasu?

[abecx]

I'm adding some stuff to the trailer, I got my better mic and putting more filler. The trailer for the channel is going to be short, a minute maybe 2 at the most. This is just for us to get a feel for the channel, the style I would like it to be and the stuff being covered.



Blizzards Warcraft franchise has been around for nearly 20 years and is soon to come out with another expansion. WoW was created to immerse the player in lore with interaction from some of the mythos most prominent figures... Unfortunately with most players once you've killed a few bosses its easy to lose track of what the hell is going on and the games turns into a loot fest. Lets face it, with a story line comprised of more than 15 books, 12 video games and even a trading card game, you would have to be wearing a red shirt to interpret what your character is doing and why. Luckily fat people like us exist that can't get girlfriends to explain mostly what the fuck is going on.

(show the original map, fade into the same area but in WoW times, show the dark portal, cutscenes from the other games, hellscream, etc )


Ever wanted to know what these are?
(show the faceless flying aqir insects)


What about how awesome this interspecies porn experiement?
(Video of Rexxar)


Listen to detailed information about why you have to kill this asshole.
(Scarlet Mon


Why this(thes?) guy(s) may not be as bad as you thought.
(Video of Moroes or illidan, both maybe )

and alot more intresting shit with serious soundtracks
(show various places around the game)

[abecx]

Creation: Unknown

Before the titans came:

Indigenous species:
Trolls, Insects ( Nerubian, Qiraji, Aqir, Silithid )

Others:
Old Gods, Elementals,

Major events:
Old gods vs titans
Creation of earthen, giants and rebuilding of Azeorth ( well of eternity )
Creation of Dragonflights
Rise of the Night elves ( cenarious, Azshara )
War between Aqir and Trolls

Story Flow:

Go over the Indigenous life on Azeroth, who and what they are ( old gods, etc ) Then talk about the titans, why they came to azeroth, what happened, etc etc. Talk about dragonflights creation the earthen etc... the war of the between sanderz and insects, and talk about the rise of nightelves the well of eternity and its role, Azshara and highbornes, then just some spoilers for lead up to the next episode

END

The war of the Ancients

[Firecrest]

Fixing your terrible sentence structure. I also did grammar even though it doesn't matter because I couldn't help it.

Blizzard's Warcraft franchise has been around for nearly 20 years and will soon release another expansion. WoW was created to immerse the player in lore and give them the opportunity to interact with some of the mythos' most prominent figures... Unfortunately, once you've killed a few bosses, it’s easy to lose track of what the hell is going on and the game can turn into a story-less loot fest.

Let’s face it, with a story line threaded through more than 15 books, 12 video games and even a trading card game, you would have to be wearing a red shirt to interpret what your character is doing and why. Luckily, people like us are fat and can’t get girlfriends, so we have plenty of time to explain what the fuck is going on.

(show the original map, fade into the same area but in WoW times, show the dark portal, cutscenes from the other games, hellscream, etc )

Ever wanted to know what these are?
(show the faceless flying aqir insects)

What about this awesome interspecies porn experiment?
(Video of Rexxar)

Listen to detailed information about why you have to kill this asshole.
(Scarlet Monastary)

Find out why this(these?) guy(s) may not be as bad as you thought.
(Video of Moroes or illidan, both maybe )

And a lot more interesting shit with serious soundtracks.
(show various places around the game)

At the end, it's weird that you start out asking questions then kinda bungle into making statements and sum it up with a statement at the end. It's awkward, but I couldn't figure out a good way to fix it. The questions don't really turn into good statements and making all of them into questions got repetitive. You'll just have to solve it with smooth inflection between the last question and the first statement. Take a fraction of a second longer pause and go down with your voice when asking the questions and up when making the statements.

Also, if you want to get people interested, you'll want to tempt them with some things that are familiar. "All these random, far flung, unimportnat lore facts about shit you've never heard of!" is not as exciting as "Obscure but interesting lore fact about someone you've actually heard of!" Learning that Illidan only had one ball would be more interesting than learning that the second boss in MgT is the son of a rare elite in Duskwood.

[abecx]

thanks that makes a lot more sense and is easier to listen to.

I'm just jotting down structures, I wont read verbaitm, I have to add abe humour.

[Firecrest]

What are you going to call your videocast?

[abecx]

I have no idea, I tried to reach out to hitshade to make the intro but he hasn't responded.


I was thinking the obvious WHAR LORE PLZ HALp if I'm lazy but i'm open to whatever.